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The night…

found poem © j.i. kleinberg ~ The night
found poem © j.i. kleinberg

6 responses to “The night…

  1. Jennifer Bullis May 22, 2014 at 9:24 am

    WOW! Way to nail a metaphor! Love this one.

  2. jik May 22, 2014 at 9:49 am

    Thanks, Jennifer. Sometimes the right bits just present themselves.

  3. susanissima May 22, 2014 at 10:59 am

    Oh, how I wish I’d written this poem! Night as mule is just fabulous.

  4. jik May 22, 2014 at 11:41 am

    Thank you, Susan!!

  5. Sheila S May 23, 2014 at 9:18 am

    I like this one, too. I wonder where the mule is hauling all that light. Is there a light dump somewhere?

  6. jik May 23, 2014 at 9:38 pm

    …maybe just over to the other side…or maybe to the place where it gets chopped up into stars…

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